Friday, May 25, 2012

Freezie haiku

Corpse hands
Grip long neon tube
Sugar coma
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3 comments:

  1. la burraMay 25, 2012 at 9:41 AM

    Oh shoot, haikus have something funky going on with the syllables...

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  2. El BurroMay 25, 2012 at 11:26 AM

    Your haiku is 1) not a haiku and 2) refers to my penis somewhere in the middle.

    All in all a good first effort.

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  3. El BurroMay 25, 2012 at 11:33 AM

    Frozen fingers curl
    Siberian breath chills
    the falcon's capped head

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